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Kail of Franel ([personal profile] valiant_kail) wrote2005-12-04 11:20 pm

Er...

Well brother, that was... not too bad, I suppose. I can see why yo

You'll definitely need to practice a bit more, your stance is pretty sloppy, and your technique needs some tightening... but we all had to start somewhere, right? I still think you can become a good swordsman.